Soumen after completing his Catering course from National Institute of Hotel Management & Catering Technology joined
one of the famous Hotels of India, in the business capital of India, situated near
Gateway of India as a Trainee. He used
to stay in one of the apartments in Andheri with his friend James who works in
a call center in graveyard shift.
Today James took “sick leave” as he planned to
meet his girlfriend in the evening. Soumen came back from work at 06:30 PM and
before James could inform him about his meeting Soumen asked him “Did somebody come
in the flat next to ours?”
“I do not know. That flat is vacant for long. Did
you see someone?” James asked.
“ Yup. There was a middle aged Lady standing in
front of the flat and its door was opened. .
When I asked her if she is our new neighbor she did not told anything and went
inside the flat” Soumen told surprisingly
“Oh! Leave it na yaar. What we have to do with
her. By the way I am going to meet Chenel at Juhu Chaupati. I will be coming
late in the night. And you know what…… today I am going to propose her” James told
“Great buddy! Go for it. Chenel is a wonderful
girl. And both of you make good couple. But just wait for me I will accompany
you till Andheri station, let me take a quick bath” Soumen told and rushed to
the bathroom.
Their bathroom and the bathroom of the next flat
shared common wall and thanks to modern “save space” construction technique,
voice can travel easily across the wall. Soumen heard someone talking in the
adjoined bathroom. It was a female voice; he presumed that she is the same Lady,
their new neighbor, maybe she was talking on her mobile as this seems to be one
sided conversation.
Lady was asking about an address to someone. “Can
you tell me exactly how can I reach there? Ok…so I can hire a taxi….great…..by
the way where exactly The TOMB is?”Lady
Asked
Soumen overheard “Where exactly The BOMB is?”
Soumen was listening to this conversation while getting undressed for bath.
She
said TOMB. He mistook it to be BOMB.
Soumen was shocked. He forgot everything and
started hearing the conversation with full concentration.
“OK…so I have to reach Santacruz Graveyard and
take right turn…and I will find it…great…. rest leave on me…I will take care…I
will reach their by 08:00 PM and after completing the job from there itself I
will leave for Delhi. Tomorrow it will be in the newspaper…great news for
people of this town. Let’s do it…bye for
now” Lady told and disconnected the call.
Soumen was frightened listening this. He with his
towel on ran to the drawing room, he was breathless.
“Hey Soumen…what happened? Why are you so breathless?”
James asked
“Buddy, this town is going to face one more blast.
We have to do something” Soumen told
“What are you talking about? Blast?? How you came
to know?” James asked
Soumen narrated what he heard in the bathroom word
by word correct what that Lady told (except in place of TOMB he mistook it as
BOMB).
It was the time for James to get shocked. “Are you
sure you heard BOMB” He asked
“I am damn sure. Now Ladies are getting recruited in terrorist camps as no one will doubt on their activities easily. Also her conversation suggests
that something is fishy. And do not forget how she reacted when I asked her if
she is our new neighbor. Let me call Marathe Saheb, our landlord and ask about
this Lady.” Soumen told and called Marathe Saheb.
“Namaste Marathe Saheb, have you rented the
flat next to ours to someone?” Soumen asked
“Yes….to Ms. Rubina Khatun, she is the business
woman from Nashik. She wants to convert that flat to guest house for her firm.”
Marathe Saheb told
“ Marathe Saheb, please don’t mind, hope you have
done the police verification of Ms. Khatun.” Told Soumen
“I have not done yet. One of my friends from
Nashik has given her reference. But anyway I will get it done soon. But why are
you asking all this?” Marathe Sahab asked
“Arre Marathe Sahab you have given this flat to
wrong person. She is planning for a blast near Santacruz Graveyard, I think
near the Market area close to Santa Cruz graveyard. You remember na how the
terrorist who attacked Mumbai last year took shelter in such kind of flat and
planned everything there. I have faced that as they attacked our Hotel and I
was one of the survivors. How can you do such mistake Marathe Sahab. Remember if
anything goes wrong police will catch hold of you. And she is from Delhi not
Nashik.” Soumen told and narrated him the same thing which he told to James.
“Oh God! Let me call Inspector Kamble. You both
come to my house we will go to him. You guys explain to him what you heard.” Told
Marathe Sahab.
All three went to meet Inspector Kamble. Soumen
again narrated the same story what he told to James & Mr. Marathe. Inspector
Kamble immediately informed police control room and took BOMB squad and three
of them and reached Santa Cruz Graveyard. In no time police took position
around the graveyard. Soumen was with
Inspector Kamble to recognize that Lady. Inspector Kamble changed his dress and
in civil dress he accompanied Soumen and took right turn from the graveyard.
After some distance they found three persons surrounded by journalists & cameraman near Mustafa Tomb.
Soumen recognised that Lady as she is is one of the three surrounded by Journalists , he told Kamble “Sir, this is her only, but why she
is surrounded by journalist, is she going to announce the blast before doing it.”
Soumen told.
“Shut up! Why the hell will she do that? Let me
ask Surya, he is in the crowd of journalist, he is famous reporter of Mid Day”.
Told Inspector Kamble.
They stand a bit away from the crowd and Kamble
called Surya, the journalist,
“Hi Surya, Kamble this side. I am in civil dress
standing a bit away from you. Can you tell me what’s going on there?” Kamble
asked.
“Hello sir, I came here to cover the Innaugral session of the renovation program of the Old Mustafa TOMB. You must be aware
Old Heritage Society was raising their voice to save this TOMB near Santacruz
Graveyard from demolition by Government. Now one of the business women from Nashik,
Ms. Rubina Khatun with two of her old business assosiates has agreed to sponsor the renovation of the TOMB from their Corporate Social Responsibility fund. Government
also agreed for that. Its great news for the people of this town. Tomorrow
everyone will know about that. Thanks to Ms. Khatun, you want to meet her? She
will leave for Delhi after this programm” Explained Surya
"No Surya, it’s OK. Will meet her next time”. Told Kamble
Inspector Kamble understood everything. He immediately
informed police control room that the information is wrong and moved to police
station with Soumen.
Inspector Kamble explained everything to all
three. James as well as Marathe Saheb shouted at Soumen for his mistake and the
confusion it has created. Inspector Kamble cooled them down and told “See it happens,
anyone can do the mistake, but important is that he acted very fast. He has
shown courage which many people does not even possess. What if it would have
been BOMB in place of TOMB? So don’t shout at him like this and you Soumen,
next time act only when you are 100% sure."
Soumen apologies to everyone and rushed to take
appointment of an ENT (Ear, Nose & Throat) specialist.
Marathe Sahab stayed back to complete the police
verification formalities of Ms. Rubia Khatun.
James rushed to Juhu Chaupati, he got 10 missed
calls from Chenel and he has no idea how to convince her and he postponed to
propose her till he get another ‘Sick Leave’ as today’s date with her is going
to over in convincing her only about the reason of late coming.
Write Over the Weekend theme for this week
She said ____. He mistook it to be ____.
The words used in the blanks have to rhyme and your post should revolve around the confusion thus created as a result of the miscommunication.
For e.g. She said book. He mistook it to be hook.

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This is a well-crafted plot. and loved the ending about taking a 'sick leave' , the next time to propose.
ReplyDeleteThanks! One of my friends actually took sick leave to propose :)
DeleteExcellent, imaginative story!
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
Deletethis is inspiring. i need to improve myself :)
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Amar - Thanks...your write up are awsomm...even I need to improve a lot :)
DeleteDo I need to say anything...you know you are an awesome blogger
ReplyDeleteYou are the inspiration...so all credit goes to you :)
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